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Tell Me How To Feel by !Shelvey:iconShelvey:



Tell me how to feel about the pain which you teach,
Just what is the cure; needle, pill or leech?
The suffering we inflicted on each another, ages ago,
Is still reverberating - someone tell me how this is so.

The dates are in front of me, the testimonies heard,
Trying to name this sensation, and I just can’t find the word,
Disgusted by the actions - sickened by the thought,
It seems these have long existed, this rancid social rot.

Bigotry and bastards - discrimination yeah,
Stereotypes and hate crime’s ain’t reserved for the Klan,
Oppression and punishment can be found wide and far,
All for what you believe, and for being who you are.

I can tell you what it’s like, I can tell you all,
Your throat tightens up, and your skin begins to crawl,
An easygoing mind - now a disapproving state,
Distrust to our leaders - and forcefully against hate.

All when you hear it hasn’t been alright,
For all the guiltless victims, a lifetime of sleepless nights,
Thought you understood - now confused and out of reach,
So tell me how to feel about the pain which you teach.

~Dedicated to anyone who doesn't know how they should feel about the shit going on in the world.~
©2005-2010 !Shelvey
:iconshelvey:

Author's Comments

I wrote the first half of the first line today in Hisstory, and finished it today, while sitting freezing my ass off in a park downtown on Sydney St. It was brought on at first as we went over the topic of the residential school systems, and then as we went into the general topic of the treatment of the Native Peoples in Canada. Depressing shit, and rather sickening. Anywya, this is just a passive look at the way we treat one another, and not knowing really how you feel. SO yeah. I'll try to limit my musical submissions after this, but anyway...on we go!

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:iconselphish12:
muthafuckin imPECCable sense of rhythm in your writing. The beat is so easy to pick up on, i have great admiration for it. Some things just flow. Good job

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you are beautiful, but you don't mean a thing to me.
A beat is a moment in the life a groove. -Wynton Marsalis
:iconshelvey:
Wow - what imPECCably nice things for you to say. Your admiration leaves me stunned and amiling. Thank you :)
:iconselphish12:
darling, you are most welcome.

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you are beautiful, but you don't mean a thing to me.
A beat is a moment in the life a groove. -Wynton Marsalis
:iconmoriko-amaya:
Great job. The words fow nicley. You chose some awesome words.

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Je m'inspire du pire- pour m'enricher
:iconshelvey:
Thanks a lot! It was one of the things I've really enjoyed writing, and actually leant some feeling to. :)
:iconmoriko-amaya:
Well good job. Kudos to you kid.

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Je m'inspire du pire- pour m'enricher
:iconmerrick1628:
It's very musical.. if that means anything :P I like it. I'd also love to hear it put to music.
:iconshelvey:
I've been increasing my search for other mediocre-musicians to play with. Who knows? I'm only two or three away.
:iconsora09:
It's awesome hun! Really flows nicely and words are really fittingly chosen. I really like it..

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Never - Ever.

[SG/06]
:iconshelvey:
Thanks a lot, like yeah! And the fave was uber-cool of you. Don't change!

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